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C. R. Quiver's avatar

Lovely! I like your poetic style, it's memorable and flowy.

Captain Peaches's avatar

Thanks for reading, I appreciate your comment! :)

lazy daisy's avatar

wow , beautiful writing , gorgeous expression !

Captain Peaches's avatar

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Chauncey Gardner's avatar

Thank you for sharing this story with us 😊

Captain Peaches's avatar

Thank you for reading! 💋